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Friday, December 12th

I wrapped my black scarf around my neck. It had been cold lately here on Mobius, but a little cold would not stop me. I pulled on my knee-high black boots, and straitened my long-sleeve black dress. Why would an energetic, ecstatic pink hedgehog like I, Amy Rose, would wear so much black? So I could have a chance to blend into the night as I went to my outlook. I left my house in a hurry and ran into the forest, where I slowed to a fast walk. I didn't walk so quickly because of fear, but because I wanted to get to my outlook as soon as possible. I emerged from the forest and sat on my outlook and looked at the sea. Sometimes, as I watch the see, I wonder why the sea is green, or how they make the waves and turn the tides. Most people would think it's stupid and silly and boring and wacky and just plain nonsense. But this was MY lookout, where I came to release myself, to calm down from the day's excitement. As much as I loved my friends and hanging out with them, especially Sonic, it was nice to just take a chill pill, ya know? Also, I threw my one wish to the sea, asking it to help me. What was that wish, you ask? That, someday, I would get just one kiss from Sonic. But it hasn't happened, and I have almost lost all hope. The snow makes my dress wet, and the wet air from the sea doesn't help either. But I plan to be here awhile, long enough to wish one more time. As when I'll make that wish, only time could tell. I feel a tear run down my cheek. I'm disappointed in myself, for believing in such tomfoolery. But I say wish aloud one last time, and blew a kiss to the sea. I'll return for my final visit tomorrow night.

Saturday, December 13th

"No Tikal! I refuse to go to the dance!" I tell Tikal. "Please Amy? It'll be fun!" she tells me. I sigh, but give in. She shuffles in my closet, but stops dead cold. "Tikal, what's wrong?" Our friend Meadow asks, just finished changing. "Amy, where did you get this AWESOME dress?" Tikal coos, pulling out my 'outlook' dress. "OMG, you should soo wear that to the dance!" Meadow gushes. They both look at me. "Pleeeeseeee???" they beg. Meadow then sees my boots, scarf and black headband. "And you could wear these with it!" she tells me. I sigh. Within 15 minutes we're all dressed and ready to go. We get into the car (which was hard, since it was a bug), and Meadow drives away from my house. "Meadow your car sucks." Tikal mutters. "Sorry. The FBI doesn't pay as well as you'd think it would." she replies. I snicker, and she swerves the car, making me fly into Tikal. "OW!" Tikal and I shout, and Meadow smirks. "Got any other complaints 'bout my car?" she asks, and we both scowl. She just chuckles as we go into the parking lot of the park. Right next to the woods that led to my outlook. We all got out and Tikal and I straitened out our outfits. Meadow walked away and took some guys hand. "Have fun! I know I will!" she shouted back at us as she walked away. "Hpm, Whatever." Tikal huffed. I elbowed her. "Hey, you better have fun, or I'm out of here." I told her. "You're house is a mile away!" "Trust me, I can manage." She rolled her eyes. "Just try to have some fun. It is a party after all." she said, leading me to the drinks. Fruit punch. Thank Chaos. Shadow walked up to us. "Evening ladies." he said. Tikal blushed and looked away. "Hi!" I said back. He tapped Tikal on the shoulder. "Tikal, would you like to dance with me?" he asked. She faced him. "Umm... sure!" she replied, and the two walked away. I sighed. Sonic, I saw was talking with Tails and Sally. Go figure. Three hours passed and the party didn't seem to be ending anytime soon. I had been standing by the punch the whole time, and I was sick of this party. I fled to the woods, but not before I Sally pull Sonic close. With tears in my eyes, I ran to my outlook. And when I got there I cried and cried and cried until all I could do was sob. I heard someone's boots crunch in the snow and sit next to me. "Amy?" I looked over. There were Sonic's emerald-green eyes staring at me. I frowned and glared at him. "Why aren't you with your GIRLFRIEND Sally?" I hissed. Sonic cowered for a second, but stood his ground. Sally?! She was crawling all over me, and I pushed her away and told her to fug off. And, since I noticed you run into the woods, so I followed you." he told me. I pulled my knees to my chest and shivered. "Why?" I asked. He looked towards the woods. "Because... I love you. I never told you, because I just thought that you were messing with me. But I do." Sonic said. "Do you love me?" I asked. He nodded. "Do you love me" he asked me, facing me. "I do." I told him. He looked out towards the sea, as if it held something. It did  It held my wish times 1000. He faced me again and took my hand in his own. He cupped my chin in his hand and tilted it lightly. He then gently kissed me on the lips, and I felt like I was in Heaven. My heart fluttered, and when he pulled away I almost pulled him back. He pulled me close and we sat there together, on OUR lookout, looking out at the wish-bearing, wish-granting sea.
This is my part of a writing trade with :iconviolinia:*violinia Hope you like it!

Amy, Tikal, Shadow, Sally, Tails, Sonic (c) SEGA

Meadow (c) ME

Enjoy!
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Just saw this now *bricked with 1,000 bricks* <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt=":XD:" title="XD"/>

<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/i/f…" alt=":iconfinallyplz:" title="finallyplz"/> Yaaay! This is super sweet! I love it! I really liked the way you portrayed Amy, I think it was a great choice! I think that her being 'depressed' because Sonic is with someone else and so is true because I think she works hard to make Sonic notice her and all. I also like your voice, especially in the first paragraph; it really sticks out and gives great imagery. Actually, overall, I think the imagery is pretty good! I especially liked the description of 'Sonic's emerald-green eyes staring at me' . <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" title="La la la la"/> I dunno, that is just a great description for me for some reason.

This part is just a suggestion, because I know it's probably a writing style, but I had some problems keeping track of who was speaking and where. Usually, when someone begins speaking, a new paragraph starts. Perhaps it's just the way I read, but that was one thing that I struggled with. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/m/m…" width="15" height="15" alt=":meow:" title="Meow :3"/>

Other than that, I really loved this story! It was short, simple and sweet! I shall work on my half of the writing trade! <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/a/n/a…" alt=":iconanimefaceplz:" title="animefaceplz"/>